Please read and comment on my poem?!?

I'm sorry, but to be quite frank, your poem confused me. I didn't get it. Most of the words you said were poetic, but they didn't make any sense. It was filled with words I couldn't decipher, because there was no context. It didn't rhyme, which while I don't mind free verse, lessens my like of your poetry. Also, there were too many references to mythology. I count 5 in the 4 lines. I haven't got a clue about who cronus is, nor do I know whether Tartus is a God or a place. While this is just my opinion, I hope you will think about simplifying your poem a little, so someone who didn't major in mythology could understand it.